I wanted it more than anything. I love it. Most of my friends had one, but my parents couldn’t afford it because at that time was very expensive.
In Uruguay there’s a holiday called Children Day. On those days, parents give presents to their children.
When children days came, I wasn’t sure what my present would be, so I asked them. They told me lies because every time I asked they changed the present. I was very mad at them. I thought that they were unfair.
I love my watch. It is precious to me. I take care of it with my own life. I have emotional feelings towards it.
Here it goes my confession: I love my Baby-G watch (believe me) I have an obsession with it.
Because it was hurting my wrist, my parents told me to take it off. When I couldn’t wear it, I almost died of despair.
That was a good confession. I liked how you gave the example that you could barely live without your watch on. I've seen you use it (I think) but I didn't know that you treasured it so much. I also think that maybe you should check your grammar, because I noticed that you were missing a couple of words or punctuation mistakes. Other than that very nice.
ReplyDeletegreat story, but as steph said there were a few mistakes, but i like how the story was put together aswell
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