Everything was going perfect. The state of anarchy in this country helped a lot. Nobody care about anything or anyone. We were ready to come in. Many people helped us. The sun was getting down; everything was going as we planned. France was going ours in a couple of minutes. But there’s one thing we didn’t prevent.
I joined the Germans conspiracy to attack France. When we got there, we got a surprise. One of our helpers said everything and the police was waiting for us. I spontaneously started running for not to get apprehend, but I failed. They got me. I was sent to a cell with others. The captain could escape. As he told us, he will be rescuing us. We don’t know how, but we trust him. Finally our plan was ruined, but we tried and we are going to be back… I promise!
I like your story! it would be good if you high light your words:) good ending I saw like 2 or 3 grammar mistakes but the rest was fantastic!
ReplyDeletegreat job!! good description, but just check the 1st paragraph, it looks a bit robot, just less periods and more commas, but i still loved it!!!:D
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